Sound Needs Work

Well really all I can think of is that your sound in that was all over the place. Quiet in some points and then suddenly jumps out. It was not smooth. Try using an audio compressor/limiter on the audio to smooth it out. Also, its spelt "douche"

SO TRUE

So True, so true.. dumbass pot smokers. And blonde guys aren't anything special. Viva la brown haired guys. And no, im not gay. Haley is wonderful g/f. I'll stop rambling now.

Shocking.. opps.. told that joke already...

I LOVE THIS! Using some smarts (print screen button) i could make up pictures that look like me and all my friends! This is brillant! Ok, for me.. put on the green cargo pants, orange shirt with sleeves hanging out, black and white shoes, put on the beard.. put the left hand wrist thing on the left ear over the earing already there, then put on the silver necklace. Next, make both eyes go down.. then make the mouth an O. Then print sceen button it to Paint.. then change the orange t shirt to black, and the sleeves hanging out to baage (how do u spell it?) and colour the pants grey. THERE! LOOKS LIKE ME!! I LOVE THIS GAME! Im GONNA MAKE ONES OF ALL MY FRIENDS...

Cycled Hum

When you record, turn off your CRT moniter. Sounds like you must have been using single coiled pick ups for the sort of hum you had right at the beginning. Either that or you need to stick a gate on your guitar. The drums sound like a Boss drum machine. Guitar clarity great (Line 6 guitar port?), but riffs are not structured and although the guitaring was confident, it wasn't overly skilled due to relying on hammer ons, pull offs, and slides (which you didn't always hit the right note).